Done the first run-through! Woo Hoo. I tracked & clarified the emotional changes axed a bunch of movement tags (Thanks to Miranda Liasson for pointing out that these were a

Apparently, I heart the word quiver. Huh.

I am shamed by the gratuitous use of italics in my first chapter. Other than that, I’m hovering in Chapter five, where, unbeknown to me prior to this revision, I