When I first read the traditional Quaker wedding vow, I was struck by it’s stark simplicity. Here’s a version, excluding names: I take thee, my friend, to be my beloved,
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Revision Update #4Revision Update #4
Done! Well, this round, anyway. I sent the requested changes off to amazing agent and two weeks ahead of schedule, to boot. I pressed send just in time to make
Revision Update #3Revision Update #3
Done the first run-through! Woo Hoo. I tracked & clarified the emotional changes axed a bunch of movement tags (Thanks to Miranda Liasson for pointing out that these were a